Summarizing What Matters in Business Writing

Mary Cullen
Post by Mary Cullen
Originally published May 27, 2014, updated October 23, 2024
Summarizing What Matters in Business Writing

One business writing skill separates advanced business writers from those who are merely functionally proficient. It is the ability to synthesize complex ideas and extract significant nuggets of information that are relevant to a particular reader and situation.

Mini Executive Summaries

In essence, these are mini-executive summaries, used widely in work communications. They are the "so what" core of the information. 

It's not a mere recitation of facts. It captures implications.

We often think an executive summary is the first part of a formal report. In fact, functional executive summaries are deployed frequently and widely by those with advanced business writing skills:

  • When your boss asks you, "Why should we fund this project?
  • When you summarize a vendor performance.
  • When you recommend a solution to a work problem.
  • When you are asked, "Why should I hire you?"
  • When you analyze data for trends.
  • When you verbally summarize project pitfalls at a meeting.
  • When you summarize the insights discussed at a meeting relevant to the overall goals.

The ability to see the big picture, quickly understand what is significant to the situation, and extract and convey the relevant essence will significantly help your career, department, and company. It will also greatly improve the efficiency and accuracy of the information flowing across your company. 

Example of Business Writing Summary

Let's apply this concept to a college student working at a summer internship. This student is an economics major working for a start-up specializing in sustainable agriculture shipping. This student's mother, college advisor, and internship company owner all ask him the same question, "What did you do during your internship?

Indeed, much information will be similar, but each person has a specific interest and focus. Appropriate executive summary or synthesis responses for each of these audiences might be:

  • Internship Company Owner who will care about the value the intern brought to the company: 

    "I developed a web portal that provides cost of living information for this area to help recruit top talent. My data analysis of comparable companies in other locations indicated our location is a competitive hiring advantage."

  • College Advisor, who will care about the student's learning and application of course skills: 

    "I developed a web portal using HTML and CSS, which we covered in Computer Science 410. Also, using an extensive data set and regression analysis, we were able to estimate and compare costs of living in the company area."
     
  • A mother who will care about a permanent job after graduation:

    "I developed a web portal and analyzed cost of living data. Website development and data analysis are two skills listed on all of the business analyst positions I hope for after graduation."

Therefore, the first step in synthesizing complex information is defining your audience thoroughly.

Tailor the Summary to the Reader

The second step is presenting information that is significant and meaningful to that particular audience.

Notice that the summary statement made to the Internship Company Owner above does not mention functional tasks, what team the intern worked on, or the dates he worked. That is all simple, functional information that led to significant information. The company owner wouldn't care about this. The owner wants to know the intern's value to the business, not background tidbits.

There is, sadly, far too much fluff and background bantered about in business writing. Mere action tasks never belong in an executive summary. Don't fall into this trap. Instead, synthesize meaningfully and extract what is truly most significant to your reader and extract only what matters.

This ability to think critically and present relevant, synthesized information to various audiences is an advanced business writing skill you want to foster in your department and your writing.

Our Executive Summary Writing course will elevate this skill. 

 

 


Mary Cullen
Post by Mary Cullen
Originally published May 27, 2014, updated October 23, 2024
Mary founded Instructional Solutions in 1998, and is an internationally recognized business writing trainer and executive writing coach with two decades of experience helping thousands of individuals and businesses master the strategic skill of business writing. She excels at designing customized business writing training programs to maximize productivity, advance business objectives, and convey complex information. She holds a B.A. in English from the University of Rhode Island, an M.A. in English Literature from Boston College, and a C.A.G.S. in Composition and Rhetoric from the University of New Hampshire.

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